She always said her perfect man would always know who he was and what he was made of.
She asked me to describe myself in one word.
I said I couldnt do that; she didnt need to hurt.
She plain walked out the door; her crying was the last thing I heard.
After she left I couldnt help but think back on what she had asked.
Im sick, Im poison, Im no good, and frozen in my state of mind.
Im hostile and bitter; I look at my eyes in the mirror and hatred is all I find.
If I had to describe myself in one word it would be, virulent, the perfect word for me.














Comments
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Yes we all know that SasuNaru would smash any Naruto couple except for KakaIru...
But all of you don't realize that sasUKE's name has a hidden message...
He was born to be an uke, duh his name is sasUKE for a reason
Anyway..about this piece. Its very moving and quite sad. Sounds like he was harboring some pretty bad stuff! My only critique (as if you were looking for one) is that it was much too short. Splendid work!
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[www.salizabeth.net]
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She asked me to describe myself in one word.
I said I couldnt do that; she didnt need to hurt. See More!
Ghostly? I can see how that may fit sometimes.
It's strange sometimes to hear what other people think about my work! In your comment you said: Its very moving and quite sad. I myself had not really looked at it that way. I knew it was kinda sad but mostly I was focused on his rough attitude that I hadn't noticed or thought deeply of anything else I suppose. He is harboring some really bad stuff, he's very angry and sad inside. Maybe I will write a story about his past, do you think I should?
Thanks again!
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She asked me to describe myself in one word.
I said I couldnt do that; she didnt need to hurt. See More!
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[www.salizabeth.net]
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Yes we all know that SasuNaru would smash any Naruto couple except for KakaIru...
But all of you don't realize that sasUKE's name has a hidden message...
He was born to be an uke, duh his name is sasUKE for a reason
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She asked me to describe myself in one word.
I said I couldnt do that; she didnt need to hurt. See More!
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Naruto: So I've got the right affinity for Sasuke...
Yamoto: Right...only wind can beat lightning
Naruto: No, I mean...
Yamoto: ?
Naruto: The only thing that can save a fire from dying and give it even more power is wind
Yamoto: .......True
I didn't mean to depress you...It didn't did it?
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She asked me to describe myself in one word.
I said I couldnt do that; she didnt need to hurt. See More!
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